Dent <<< LOL

Name : Andrew
Age : 13 1995
Location: Australia
Time Spent : ALOT!! TO MUCH XD
Names In Sever : Dent And Shrek
Reason to Be Gm : I should Be Gm Im Reposaple I Been Play MS ALOT!
I CommuniCate Very Quite Good To me I Make Freinds Alot And
Be Happy GO URBANMS!!!!!!!!! ROCK!!
What I Think GM Will Be : I THINK IT WILL BE A BIG JOB AND RESPONARPLE XD
AND QUITE AWESOME TO ME!! YEAH!!
CONTACT : just Add muandrew@live.com On MSN!
I have 2 little brothers hope THEY DIE !!! YEAH SO they dont ignore me while im playing THIS ROCKING SEVER YEAH BAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

LITTLE BROTHER DIE!!!!
Im A Little Lazy But if u choose me as a gm I'll be not lazy I LOVE GIVING ITEMS TO WELCOME PEOPLES! I JUST LOVE COMEPUTER AND WII AND SPORTS AND TVV!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Enjoy Please Choose Me As A gm
Love Dent Or Andrew )

Hmm LOL LOL I think i made mistakes

1. You want your brothers to die
2. Its a bit short
3. A TINY bit spammish
4. You say something then say something else that is the opposite a few times

Quote :

Im A Little Lazy But if u choose me as a gm I'll be not lazy

5. (sorry if im blunt) Bad typing skills and grammar. To MSN-ish...

no offense in this post just feedback for improvement